Haiku: True Peace

Published on Monday, February 18, 2013 by Katherine

Could this really be day 18 of the WWFC Blog Writing Challenge? Today we must use the phrase, “Home at Last.”

I’ve told my children to cremate me when I die and sprinkle my ashes on the dunes of Corolla. Only then will I find true peace.

Fisherman has passed.

Ashes float in the ocean.

Now he’s home at last.

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nonamedufus

Simple and serene. Very nice. I love that picture, too.
Mel

What a wonderful photo to accompany the haiku. Well done.
Ziva

That’s a beautiful photo and a beautiful sentiment. Great job, Katherine. 🙂
Laughing Mom

Nicely done, Katherine!
Tami Von Zalez

Perfection ~
Linda Medrano

Really elegant! Lovely, Katherine!
Ron

Katherine, my friend, stunning Haiku.

As well as the photo!

Yeah, when I die I want to be cremated too.

X
Linda R.

Excellent Haiku. Sad and yet peaceful.
Indigo Roth

Loved it, Katherine. The photo is beautiful too x
P.J.

Very nicely done.
Nicky

Ok, I’m never trying my hand at poetry again. You totally kicked my ass with yours 🙂
mikewjattoomanymornings

Your words and poem are lovely, if a bit sad. I hope your ashes won’t be sprinkled at Corolla any time soon.
mike

Greatness. Loved it 🙂
KZ

I have a sudden strong urge to sing “My Bonnie Lies Over the Ocean”. Your poem dredges up similar feelings of melancholy for me.
Boom Boom Larew

That sounds pretty good to me!
meleahrebeccah

That’s exactly what I want too.
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